Thursday 9 August 2018

Play Summary



Play Summary - Term 3 Weeks 1-2


For the next two weeks you are working in groups to practise
and perform a play. This is using our oral language and reading
skills in literacy. Our key competency focus is participating and contributing.


For writing your task is to summarise the main events in your play
in three paragraphs. You must plan your writing first but it is up to
you how you do your planning.  You must also write a fourth paragraph
about your experience of practising and performing your play.


Yr 6
I am learning to organise my text into paragraphs which begin with
a main idea and contain supporting information/detail.
I am learning to make links across paragraphs.
I am learning to use basic punctuation accurately.
I am learning to use dialogue punctuation accurately.

Yr 7
I am learning to use a range of different planning styles.
I am learning to plan my writing to suit the purpose of my writing.
I am learning to organise my ideas into paragraphs where the ideas
are clearly related and where there are links within and between paragraphs.
I am learning to use basic punctuation accurately in my writing.
I am learning to use complex punctuation to enhance my writing e.g.
colons : and semi-colons ; , and parentheses ().


Success Criteria
I will be successful when I can/have
-summarised the play in three paragraphs
-made links across my paragraphs
-used some basic and complex punctuation correctly (speech marks).
Once you have finished your writing highlight these success criteria
green you have met them and can show them in your work.
Highlight green in your work where you have met these success criteria.


Once upon a time there was a boy called jack and His mother that
were very poor.
One day jack’s mum told jack to sell their cow daisy.


on the way to the market jack saw a salesman.
the salesman came towards jack.
he asked jack if he was selling the cow.
jack told the salesman the cow was for sale.
the salesman gave jack something more
valuable than money :magic beans. jack t
hanked the salesman and took the magic beans and
went home and told his mum what he did.


his mum was very angry with jack. she took the beans
from jack and threw them out the window.
in the night the beanstalk grew bigger. and in the
morning jack’s mum comes in his room yelling,
“JACK JACK” there's a giant beanstalk.
jack climbed the stalk and saw a giant castle and also
heard a giant’s footsteps. The giant had a gold goose
that laid the giant gold eggs. So jack stole the goose
and climbed down the stalk with the giant gaining on him.


Jack reached the bottom of the stalk. Jack took an axe
and chopped down the stalk. and the giant died and jack  
and also his mum were very rich. They lived happily ever after!
The end.


My team and i worked well together and
everyone participated and contributed.
We need to improve on props and the acting went
well.